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Monday, October 30th 2006

10:21 PM

A few more hours before NaNoWriMo 2006 starts :-D :-D

  • Mood: Giddy with Excitement
I know I've neglected this journal for a few months. Nothing important to report on or I haven't had the time. My Muse has been begging me for weeks to write for Sub Rosa: Allies and Renegades, the third part of the Sub Rosa trilogy, but I want to write that for NaNoWriMo. Very insistent my Muse.

I'm ready to go. No outlines. Nothing writing down. Just scenes in my mind. I had started on this back in the early part of the year, but I haven't read anything I wrote since then. Blank slate or blank paper for me.

Wishing luck to all those undertaking this challenge.
MSR
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Thursday, January 12th 2006

9:21 PM

First post of 2006 :-D

  • Mood: Giddy with excitement
I hope everyone had a Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and started a great New Year.

I recently finished typing up my NaNoNovel and will be editing it when I have the time. Right now, I have ideas for the third part of the Sub Rosa trilogy, mainly the teaser and tag scenes. It's been floating around in my mind for years. Now the Muse wants to give this one it's overdue attention. Funny how the Muse jumps from one project to another.

Going to get back to the original, I'm hoping soon. Gotta get another section up. During my downtime, I've read a couple of novels and read a few books to improve my writing. Hopefully, it'll show.

BTW, it's kind of hard to concentrate on writing while watching the second season of Dancing with the Stars.

Have a good one and take care,
MSR
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Tuesday, December 6th 2005

10:10 PM

Thought I'd share :-D

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Thought I'd like to share.   I started reading Sub Rosa: Ghosts of the Past last night. I'm posting the introductory/teaser scene. I reread it and it's not as spoilery as I first thought. Coolness for you all.

I haven't written anything since Nov. 28 and it's strange. I have free time, but what I have wanted to do is add a few scenes. I'll get to printing out my certificate. I think it would look good printed on photo paper and framed. I might even have it as my desktop image but it's going to be hard to replace this Meeting of the Eight that I've had for a long time.



Sub Rosa: Ghosts of the Past

 

Memorial Gardens
3:25 PM

The fog hung low, covering the grounds in a white shroud. The cold mist was stirred by unexpected winds whipping between the talismans of the dead. Somberly standing in front of an ornately decorated placard was someone who kept his promises. This promise he would endeavor to keep til his death. He glanced around feeling eyes watching him. It was a familiar feeling, but one that he wasn’t expecting.

He heard a tiny squeak to his left and turned to look at the origin. It was a brown mouse hurrying through the grass, trying to get away from this place of the dead.

“Wasn’t expecting you here,” announced a voice right behind him.

“You know I keep my promises.” He glanced back to face his accuser.

“Kind of late, don’t you think?” She walked forward, showing empty hands then stood next to him.

“That’s an empty gesture.” He saw her hands retreat back into the warm pockets of her black trench coat.

“Want to pat me down to be sure?”

“No.” The irritation in his voice shattered the mist between them.

“So, he didn’t even show up?” Her voice carried slightly louder than what she wanted.

“You know he can’t do it.”

“Stop making excuses for him.” She picked up a weed trespassing near the angel on the bottom of the placard.

“I’ve never made excuses for him. You know how I feel about him.” He glanced around, knowing wherever she went, he would always be close.

“He didn’t even come to the funeral.” She wiped the dirt from the rose on the right side of the placard.

“He disappeared for a while then came back like nothing happened.”

“He broke his promises like he always has.”

“Not promises, but lies.” He crouched down and placed a white teddy bear in front of the placard. “Happy birthday, my friend.” He looked to his right. “And a happy birthday to you too.”

He stood up and moved closer to her. “You need to end all of this now. I can’t bury more friends… there aren’t that many left.”

“He knows how to end… give me something I want and he gets something back.”

“What are you talking about?”

“He knows. Give him the message.”

The wind whipped up. He felt a coldness behind his left ear. He flinched knowing what it had meant.

“See she wants you to deliver the message personally.”

“I wish she’d stop doing that.”

“Tell her, but I doubt she will. She’s very insistent, you know.”

“Mind you, will you stop kidding like this?”

He felt coldness grip his legs, teasing him. “Okay, that’s enough little ones. Uncle will do as your Mommy wants now go play.”

The giggles of young children echoed through the area.

“Deliver on your promise to me or suffer the consequences.”

“If I do this for you, will you cease?”

A smile appeared on her face. “Now that’s up to him, isn’t it?”

He knew that it was going to a storm again.

I'll post more snippets as I polish the scenes. I'm finally transferring it onto Word. It's funny that I can actually read my handwriting. Usually when I'm in a hurry my letters blur or I skip words because my fingers are a tad slower than my brain. My chickenscratch is readable. Bwhahahhahahaha.

Take care,
MSR

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Wednesday, November 30th 2005

7:40 PM

You're Winner! Thanks to my supporters!!! :-D

  • Mood: Thank you!!!!!
A Thank You to my many supporters!!!! Whoooohoooo you all rock for getting me through this insane quest!!!

A Great Thank You goes out to JTHeyman who first posted the link for NaNoWriMo. Whoohoo for him too for he crossed the 50K line also!!! Whoohooo for all the participants!!!!

Kind of feels strange not writing for two straight days. I guess the Muse needs a break after all the work she's done for me. As for when Sub Rosa: Ghosts of the Past gets posted, I'll let you know. Gotta finish Group X: Sub Rosa first, remember?

I'll probably post a few snippets that I think are finished and not so spoilery. Come to think of it, SR:GOP is both a prequel and sequel to GX:SR.   The flashbacks in SR:GOP are the ones that I couldn't fit into GX:SR, but make more sense in this sequel. I've set up a few things for SR:GOP in GX:SR and now that I've basically finished SR:GOP, I can add a few more things in the last quarter of the story. Heck, the Muse even threw in a new character that will shore up the storyline for the sequel to SR:GOP. I've been wondering for years how to fill that plothole. Now I got it.

Thanks again for my supporters for which over the years, I couldn't have made this possible. You have brought me joy and happiness in writing. Thanks again and you rock hardcore!!!!

Take care,
MSR
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Wednesday, November 30th 2005

6:51 PM

Thank you to Chris Baty and the NaNoWriMo team!

  • Mood: Thank you!!!!
Thank you Chris and the entire team! I never thought I'd ever get a novel finished within a deadline. I've set so many deadlines and not once have I even gotten close. It was always that pesky Editor Muse that was holding everything up. This time that Editor Muse got scared away. I usually write in front of the computer, but it always took more time then when I wrote in a journal. Sometimes I wrote in my journal then transferred it. Other times, it's the blank screen staring at me for days at a time.

Now, I've got the confidence that I can meet a deadline and write no matter how crappy the sentences looked, I could edit it later. It became fun again to write! This was the best time I've had writing. Thanks for the encouraging emails, Chris, I know I needed them.

I plan to do this next year.

Congrats to everyone who participated, no matter if you crossed the 50K line or not!!!! Looking forward to next year and maybe I'll get to finish a rough draft of this sequel to this NanoNovel. I'm still working on the original, but I got the sequel finished!


Thank you Chris and the entire team!!!!
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Tuesday, November 29th 2005

8:01 PM

I won! I won! :-D

  • Mood: Whooohooo I made it!
I finished last night with 51,392 words.   I wrapped up the major plotline though I'd like to add a few more scenes to make it more complete.

Grand total of Grande White Chocolate Mochas consumed for entire month: 8
Total number of dinners used used as treats during month: 4

What I learned:
1. Keep writing even if you only write 200 words that day. The next day is going to be better.

2. When the Muse is on a roll, go with it because she might leave any second.

3. Editor Muse needs to be quiet for a while so I wrote this in longhand in two journals. If I sit at the computer, Editor Muse tends to stay.

4. Though I had a basic outline in my head, the muse added more scenes. Even added a new character that will play a part in the sequel to this one.

5. Write no matter how horrible the sentence looks or sounds, you can edit it later.

It was a rough ride especially through week 2, but I caught up during week 3 then went past my goal in the beginning of Week 4. I'm happy I finished two days early. Now I can sleep well.   I'd like to participate in NaNoWriMo 2006, maybe even get this second sequel to Sub Rosa finished. Now onto editing this novel and writing more on GX: Sub Rosa.

Take care,
MSR

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Wednesday, November 9th 2005

6:54 PM

Week One!!!!

  • Mood: Staying Alive! Staying Alive!
Wow! Week One of NaNoWriMo is over! It was a rough week trying to balance real life with writing. It was also tough trying to figure out which scenes I wanted to work on. I'm not looking at the outline that I made years ago for this novel. I'm not even looking at the prequel, Group X: Sub Rosa, which I'm still working on, though the flashback in the prequel is part of what I'm writing now.

Grande White Chocolate Mochas consumed for week 1: 2, treats for me for writing so much and to stay up

Week two started out with a bang with 3,168 words. I crossed the 10K barrier yesterday with 10,283. Still a little behind, but I'm getting there! Go Muse!

An excerpt from the beginning paragraph, my first words written ,  that doesn't spoil the prequel...

Memorial Gardens
3:25 PM

The fog hung low, covering the grounds in a white shroud. The cold mist was stirred by unexpected winds whipping between the talismans of the dead. Somberly standing in front of an ornately decorated placard was someone who kept his promises. This promise he would endeavor to keep til his death. He glanced around feeling eyes watching him. It was a familiar feeling, but one that he wasn't expecting.
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Saturday, October 29th 2005

10:40 PM

Alternate Scenes and more :D

  • Mood: Time for a few secrets
Regarding alternate scenes...

What I try to do is to put myself in place of the character and see it from their POV... to feel, to experience the situation and write the thoughts and emotions that I am feeling.

For example, In
Chp. 6 of Group X: Sub Rosa, a major character just found out the death of a loved one. His subordinate gave him the news and it hit him hard. I wanted the scene to have the emotional impact that straight narration couldn't provide so I chose poetry to express it...

Staring at the message
I love you Sabre
Hearing Cassie’s voice
In his mind
Remembering the first time
She had told him that
Haunted by the memories
Of the past five years
The emptiness in his heart


If I did straight narration, it would have been an ordinary description found in so many other stories. Roughly, it would have read like this without the poetic feel...

SE stared at the PADD.

"Sabre, I love you" Cassie's voice echoed in his mind as he read the words.

He remembered the first time she told him that. The memories of the past five years haunted him, an emptiness in his heart.


Now which version do you prefer? I like the poetic version. After each line, there's a pause so you can really understand the words as well as reading it a little slower than a regular sentence. To me, within that stanza, it expresses exactly how SE feels. I can feel his emotions. Do you?

In the narration version, I read the lines too fast and it doesn't tell me how he feels. It's bland. It's ordinary. I could make this version a little more descriptive or change a few words here and there, but it's still the same. I don't feel the emotion. Do you?

There are some scenes that I wrote that were in narration, but I found that poetry expresses it better. And um... don't tell anyone this... I use poetry as a crutch to help me save time by skipping past a particularly difficult element in a scene such as describing the setting or a situation. More often than not, this element has been beaten to death like a poor horse or I have no idea where to start.

For other alternate scenes, I approach the situation from another angle and compare that with the original one. There have been certain scenes that run through my mind and I'm the director yelling, "Cut!" each time then restarting it with a subtle difference. It keeps on running in my mind, sometimes for days and the only way for it to stop is to write it down. Once it's written down, it's in it's final form or close to it. I guess it's worth the restless days trying to get the scene out of my mind and onto paper or on the computer.

I do a majority of my writing using paper and pen. I find it easier to focus on writing then being distracted on the computer with online access. Yeah, I know... be more high tech, it'll save you time. That maybe true, but I'm not taking a chance that my computer could die before I can save it to CD. If I have my notebook, I can rewrite it without the edits of course, but at least I'll have it.

This is a long entry... does it make up for skipping yesterday which was mundane and you don't want to read that, do you?

Take care,
MSR
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Thursday, October 27th 2005

7:22 PM

It was a dark and stormy...

  • Mood: Good vibes, baby, good vibes
Yeah, you know how that goes, except tonight it's not stormy.
Found the notebook. Whoooohoooo. Barnes and Nobles is my friend. White chocolate mocha is my friend too.

Outlines are someone else's friends. LOL  As for my outlines, just one line descriptions or pieces of dialogue written on the fly. Later on, if necessary, then I use an outline to order the myriad scenes, alternate scenes and alternate alternate scenes. Funny how a scene changes over time. Not funny is the rewriting, but hey, that's the fun.

Take care until next time. Same writing journal, same green light!
Umm... don't know what that means.

~~~ MSR
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Wednesday, October 26th 2005

7:25 PM

The search for a journal

  • Mood: Silly
I was looking around for a journal for my NaNoWriMo novel because I didn't want what I'm currently working on to be in the same one. Too confusing! Besides I only started an outline for Group X: Sub Rosa halfway through. Think I need an outline for this NaNoWriMo novel?   I'll write one up when I... um... maybe.

Take care everyone and thanks for the support!

~~~ MSR
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Tuesday, October 25th 2005

10:18 PM

First Post!!!!

  • Mood: Excited
Whooohooooo!!! First post!!!! I just love posting that.
This is my first time participating in NaNoWriMo. I'm torn between two stories at the moment, but I'm leaning toward a sequel. Yeah, I know, finish the original first. Wish me luck! Nov. 1 is fast approaching!

~~~ MSR
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